IELTS Writing Task 1 The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.

The given illustration displays how leather products are transformed into

high quality

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high-quality

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goods. From sourcing the

animals

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animal's

animals'

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skins,

cleaning

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to cleaning

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and processing them through several chemical components with the help of physical motions of specified machinery.

To begin

with the procurement of the untreated material from regulated and official tanners, to the cleaning of these in a bath with a particular wash made from lime diluted in water to break down the protein before soaking it in a new mixture with a higher concentration of like.

After

this

is

then

flatted out between two large metal cylinders and tanned in a solution of water and vegetable by-products. The next stage would be for the leather to be polished until shiny to

finally

arrive in the hands of experienced and talented

craftsman’s

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craftsman

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employees of the workshop, where they would create the high-end accessories used in today’s fashion world.

To sum up

,

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is understandable the price tag of leather accessories as the production from start to end is long and

required

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requires

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a lot of care.