You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The

chart

illustrates the proportion of the world

population

and the distribution of revenue by region.

Overall

, it can be seen that North America and Europe are the richest meanwhile India and Africa don’t possess much revenue. It can be seen from the

chart

that North America are the

most

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apply

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wealthiest since

their

Correct pronoun usage

its

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population

only

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is only

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over 5% but

their

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its

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global

wealth

is at nearly 35% which is

highest

Correct article usage

the highest

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in the

chart

. It is

also

clear that

rich

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the rich

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Asian -

Pacific’s

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Pacific

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holds just below 25% of Global

wealth

,

holds

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and holds

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2nd place on the

chart

proportionally. The

chart

shows that India and Africa

has

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have

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the least amount of

wealth

since 15% of

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the world

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world

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world's

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population

are

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is

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Indian and 10 %

are

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is

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African and their

wealth

distribution

are

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is

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nearly 0%. It can be concluded

in

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from

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the graph that proportionally, China is the poorest since

Chinese

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the Chinese

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are just below 25% of the World

population

but they only have below 5% revenue.