The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture below illustrates how
electricity
is produced using geothermal energy.
Overall
, it is a 5-step, lineal process, which mainly uses
water
. The process begins with the transportation of cold
water
and ends with the production of
electricity
. First of all, the cold
water
stored in a container is pumped under the
grown
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ground
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to the injection well, which is located at 4.5 km under the ground.
Then
, the
water
flow
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flows
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from right to left, passing through a geothermal zone, where
water
is heated by the hot rocks.
The next step is
the production well, where hot
water
is produced and it is pumped up, out of the ground,
then
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and then
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the
water
pass
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through the condenser. Here, the
water
is condensed and converted into steam. Afterwards, steam passes through a turbine which is powered.
Finally
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Finally,
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the
electricity
is generated using the turbine and the
electricity
is delivered to the power grid through power lines.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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