The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
The diagrams show the developments which took place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
Overall
, a comparison of the 3 maps reveals a change of
Change preposition
from
small
Correct article usage
a small
centre
to a big centre
.
In 1960, the map illustrate
four buildings Wrong verb form
illustrated
such
as shopping Correct quantifier usage
apply
centre
, hospital
, farmland and Correct article usage
a hospital
car
Correct article usage
a car
park
, but during the next 20 years
more of Add a comma
years,
this
structures Correct determiner usage
these
have been
changed.
Wrong verb form
were
For instance
, the building to the left of the hospital was knocked down and replaced by cancer
Correct article usage
a cancer
centre
. Also
the hospital Add a comma
Also,
have
got a pharmacy. Change the verb form
has
Furthermore
, the farmland to the left of the car
park
was turned into the
nursing school. Changes were interesting in 2000. Buildings from below Correct article usage
a
main
road and Change the article
the main
the
left of the hospital and Change preposition
to the
car
park
were removed and combined into the
one building Correct article usage
apply
calling
Wrong verb form
called
cancer
Correct article usage
the cancer
centre
, but the nursing school was saved and moved to the car
park
. Generally
the changes did not affect the hospital and parking.Add a comma
Generally,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, car, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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