The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
The maps below illustrate how Queen Mary Hospital
have
changed since its construction in 1960
So it is clear to see, that Change the verb form
has
map
had Correct article usage
the map
became
from Verb problem
gone
regular
street to Correct article usage
a regular
fully
medical place.
First of all, in 1960 there Correct article usage
a fully
had
been shopping Verb problem
was
centre
and farmland, that had replaced with cancer
Add an article
a cancer
the cancer
centre
, pharmacy and nurse
school in nineteen eighty.Wrong verb form
nursing
It
Add a verb
It is
It was
also
noticeable, that the only things that had
not changed Wrong verb form
have
was
Change the verb form
were
car
park and Correct article usage
the car
main
road. Correct article usage
the main
Also
, instead
of 4 similarly
by size buildings there had been five. Shopping
Add an article
The shopping
centre
had kicked off and had turned into 2 new constructions.
The biggest changes on the map, for one time period for sure, had been in two thousands year
. Fix the agreement mistake
thousand years
The one
of the most noticeable Correct article usage
One
thing
Change to a plural noun
things
had been
parking. It had turned about twice smaller. Wrong verb form
was
Instead
of half of car
Add an article
the car
station
it had placed a little nursing school. For that place, we can see the biggest building Add a comma
station,
for
all the maps, which is Change preposition
on
cancer
Correct article usage
the cancer
centre
that had grew
into almost half of the mapWrong verb form
has grown
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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