The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
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On all three maps, we can see differences that have appeared over time because of the urban development and structural modifications.
On
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the first diagram, we can see four buildings standing along Main Road: the "Shopping
Centre
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," "Hospital," "Farmland," and "Car Park." The second diagram
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changes that have taken place over a period of twenty years (1960-1980). The hospital has received an additional connected small building called the "Pharmacy." When, the "Shopping
Centre
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" and "Farmland"
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replaced by the "Cancer
Centre
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" and "Nursing School," respectively, The "Car Park" territory remained unchanged during
this
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time.
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the
last
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picture, which
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the next twenty-year period (1980-2000), even more significant changes have been introduced. The "Cancer
Centre
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" has expanded, taking over the previous location of the "Nursing School." To accommodate these changes, the "Car Park" has been divided into two separate sections, allowing space for the "Nursing School" to be positioned between it and the enlarged "Cancer
Centre
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • renovation
  • expansion
  • modernization
  • facilities
  • departments
  • adjacent structures
  • patient care
  • medical technology
  • specialized centers
  • eco-friendly initiatives
  • initial layout
  • construction
  • extensions
  • improvements
  • community health services
  • capabilities
  • repurposing
  • developments
  • efficiency
  • upgrades
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