The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
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The maps illustrate alterations in the layout of Queen Mary Hospital from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
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, the hospital
had
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seen significant development in terms of new facilities. In 1960,
this
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area had a main road
in
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the top which
unchanged
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was unchanged
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between 1960 and 2000.
Moreover
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, the most striking change is that
a
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farmland in the left corner had been demolished to make room for nursing school. The shopping
centre
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next to
farmland
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the farmland
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had been
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was
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developed into a new cancer
centre
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and pharmacy in 1980.
However
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, there was a dramatic change in the cancer
centre
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and nursing school which had been grouped into a cancer
centre
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in 2000.
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, another major change to the area
had been
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the development of
car
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a car
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park in the bottom-right corner to divide into
nursing
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a nursing
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school and
car
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a car
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park in 2000. Despite the changes,
hospital
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hospitals
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in the vicinity of
car
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the car
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park had been
remaind
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remained
in their original location after 40 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • renovation
  • expansion
  • modernization
  • facilities
  • departments
  • adjacent structures
  • patient care
  • medical technology
  • specialized centers
  • eco-friendly initiatives
  • initial layout
  • construction
  • extensions
  • improvements
  • community health services
  • capabilities
  • repurposing
  • developments
  • efficiency
  • upgrades
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