Students at university often have a choice of places to live. Some prefer to live on the campus dormitories while others choose to live in apartments in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons and specific details to support your preference
University
students
may come from various backgrounds and different countries, especially if the university itself is quite popular with international Use synonyms
students
. One of the important points for the Use synonyms
students
before starting the semester is choosing suitable accommodation. The Majority of Use synonyms
students
prefer to live in the dormitory as it is usually quite affordable and Use synonyms
nearby
the campus. Correct your spelling
near
However
, I believe leasing an Linking Words
apartment
is Use synonyms
more
preferable since it is not restricted by dorm rules and gives easier access to facilities and activities in the community.
Living in Correct quantifier usage
apply
own-leased
Correct article usage
an own-leased
apartment
clearly gives more flexibility for Use synonyms
students
. Unlike in dormitories, there Use synonyms
is
no restricting rules Change the verb form
are
such
as curfews Linking Words
thus
Linking Words
students
can utilize and manage their time more creatively than living in dormitories. Use synonyms
Students
may Use synonyms
also
find Linking Words
this
benefit attractive since they can actively do part-time work or spend more time Linking Words
for
research or their thesis outside campus.
Change preposition
on
In addition
, by living in an Linking Words
apartment
outside campus, Use synonyms
students
can access various facilities and activities offered in the community. It is beneficial especially for international Use synonyms
students
since they can directly learn and immerse themselves in the local culture on a daily basis. Use synonyms
Students
can Use synonyms
also
quickly learn the local language Linking Words
while
living in the community. They can Linking Words
also
gain insightful experience from being involved in a community’s activities Linking Words
such
as local festivities.
In summary, Linking Words
although
living in dormitories may have its perks, living in an Linking Words
apartment
provides more diverse advantages for Use synonyms
students
. Living in apartments will certainly give beneficial and impactful experiences for the Use synonyms
students
.Use synonyms
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