You recently ordered a product online. When it arrived, you found that the product was not as shown on the website and it had some defects. You would like to return the product and seek a refund. Describe the details of the product including the date and time of the order and delivery. Mention how it was not similar to the product you ordered and the problems you came across. State how you would like the representative to resolve the issue you have faced.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a
product
I have purchased recently and to request a full refund. I ordered the first time this
product
by online on 15th October at 6.30 pm. The product
is fancy dress materials which I wanted to wear in the upcoming Diwali festival. cloth closer is red and blue. In a pitcher, it shows embroidery work with blue stone with a fancy belt. It is showing me to delivery on 26th October. in between 2 pm to 6 pm.
Primely product
was delivered I had to check colors of the product
were totally different it was not red it was orange and blue and worked on the product
it was different, not similar to the pitcher that I had seen at the time of purchase. This
is an expensive product
. The quality of dress materials is not good. this
is totally different from what I had ordered.
Secondly
, I had paid delivery charges which are showing included in the product
but at the time of delivery man took these charges for my side. I am totally dissatisfied with this
shopping.
I need help from a customer representative. I need my money back from the company as soon as possible because I ordered this
for an upcoming festival. Please resolve this
or I will talk streak action on this
company. It will impact on the brand name. please reward me on same mail id. I am waiting for your reply,u.
Regards,
Akanksha TiwariSubmitted by t.akanksha.mba on
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