The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given bar chart
described
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describes
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how often
the
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apply
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local, national
and
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apply
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international and mobile
telephone
calls were utilized by the British over the period of 7 years from 1995 to 2002.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the majority of the total number of
telephone
calls were by the
local
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locals
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.
In addition
, national, international and mobile
telephone
conversation
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conversations
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rose annually between 1995 and 2002.
To begin
with, the UK's long-distance calls by the locals were shipped at 72
billion
in 1995 and rose significantly until reaching 90
billion
, which is the highest figure
of
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in
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this
category.
Then
, there was a considerable fall in
this
data to the same number as
1995
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in 1995
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in 2002. In terms of national and international
telephone
usage, there was a steady increase over the period from 36
billion
in 1995 to 56 in 2000.
In particular
, the total figures in 2001 and 2002 were relatively similar, at 60 and 61
billion
, respectively. Afterwards, the data for mobile
telephone
conversation
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conversations
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was the lowest and it climbed up rapidly from 3 to 45
billion
between 1995 and 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words telephone, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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  • telecommunications
  • landline
  • mobile phones
  • local calls
  • national and international calls
  • billion
  • minutes
  • growth
  • decrease
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • overtake
  • peak
  • plummet
  • steady
  • significant
  • minor
  • chart
  • period
  • comparison
  • category
  • data
  • illustrate
  • reveal
  • indicate
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