The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows male and female
gym
membership over a thirty-year Use synonyms
period
. The vertical axis represents the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
members
in units of 1000. The horizontal axis represents the Use synonyms
period
from 1980 to 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
gym
Use synonyms
memberships
fluctuated over the past thirty Use synonyms
years
. All male Use synonyms
gym
Use synonyms
memberships
increased and decreased extremely over the Use synonyms
period
, and all female Use synonyms
gym
Use synonyms
memberships
slightly increased and decreased over the year. The highest Use synonyms
number
of male Use synonyms
gym
Use synonyms
memberships
was in 2005, and the lowest Use synonyms
number
of male Use synonyms
gym
Use synonyms
memberships
was in 2010. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the highest and lowest numbers of female Linking Words
gym
Use synonyms
memberships
were in 1980 and 1995.
In 1980, the Use synonyms
number
of male Use synonyms
gym
Use synonyms
members
almost doubled over five Use synonyms
years
. After that, it decreased dramatically Use synonyms
less
than 2000 Change preposition
to less
members
from 1995 to 2000 over the Use synonyms
period
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the lowest Linking Words
number
of female Use synonyms
members
was half that of male Use synonyms
members
in 1980, and it rose slightly over the next thirty Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
Then
the highest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
members
was over ten Use synonyms
years
from 1995 to 2005, respectively.Use synonyms
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