The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows male and female
gym
membership over a thirty-year period
. The vertical axis represents the number
of members
in units of 1000. The horizontal axis represents the period
from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, the number
of gym
memberships
fluctuated over the past thirty years
. All male gym
memberships
increased and decreased extremely over the period
, and all female gym
memberships
slightly increased and decreased over the year. The highest number
of male gym
memberships
was in 2005, and the lowest number
of male gym
memberships
was in 2010. On the other hand
, the highest and lowest numbers of female gym
memberships
were in 1980 and 1995.
In 1980, the number
of male gym
members
almost doubled over five years
. After that, it decreased dramatically less
than 2000 Change preposition
to less
members
from 1995 to 2000 over the period
. In contrast
, the lowest number
of female members
was half that of male members
in 1980, and it rose slightly over the next thirty years
. Then
the highest number
of members
was over ten years
from 1995 to 2005, respectively.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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