In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage?
Technology has
been
flourished by leaps and bounds in different ways. Advancement of technology will be Unnecessary verb
apply
threaten
to Wrong verb form
threatening
the
mankind in the Correct article usage
apply
upcoming
future same as all motor Correct word choice
apply
vehicles
will be automatic in the upcoming periods. Folks will be the passengers and AI can do everything. I consider driverless
vehicles
has
drawbacks Change the verb form
have
outweigh
the benefits. I will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.
To commence with, there are more disadvantages of the automatic Correct pronoun usage
that outweigh
vehicles
, one of the main drawbacks is that people should be depended
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dependent
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on softwares
softwares
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software
,
if any mistake Remove the comma
apply
occures
making software Correct your spelling
occurs
people
life will be Change noun form
people's
dangerous
not Add the comma(s)
dangerous,
garanty
. Correct your spelling
guaranty
For instance
, "Tesla
" is the world's Correct article usage
The Tesla
the
first automatic truck but Correct article usage
apply
this
car accidents more than manual drivers accidents because the
manual drivers can handle Correct article usage
apply
the
unexpected Correct article usage
apply
the
situations but Correct article usage
apply
the
automatic Correct article usage
apply
vehiles
Correct your spelling
vehicles
are not
do it. Another disadvantage is that Verb problem
cannot
drivers
occupations will be ruined Fix the agreement mistake
driver
due to
driverless
, consequently
, unemployment
ratio will Correct article usage
the unemployment
be increased
dramatically. Wrong verb form
increase
Hence
, this
advance
trend will Replace the word
advanced
provides
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provide
dertrimenals
drawbacks.
Correct your spelling
detrimental
Furthermore
, there are some benefits contain this
trend. One of the advantage
is that Change to a plural noun
advantages
autiomatic
cars are the best for long Correct your spelling
automatic
travels
, people will not Fix the agreement mistake
travel
tired
Add a missing verb
be tired
for
driving, Change preposition
of
they
can take Correct word choice
and they
rest
because the software can do Correct article usage
a rest
it
everything. Another benefit is that Correct pronoun usage
apply
reducing
Wrong verb form
it reduces
thecongestion
problem because these kinds of Correct article usage
the thecongestion
driverless
vehicles
can drive very fast and they already setup
applications, Correct your spelling
set
it
Correct pronoun usage
They
knows
clearly which route Correct subject-verb agreement
know
makes
free without Correct subject-verb agreement
make
stucking
traffic. Correct your spelling
stuck
For instance
, traffuic
issues will be reduced Correct your spelling
traffic
trastically
when all the motor Correct your spelling
dramatically
vehicles
will
become Verb problem
apply
driverless
. these are the benefits of having an automatic
Correct the article-noun agreement
an automatic vehicle
automatic vehicles
vehicles
.
In conclusion, driverless
buses will be the
dangerous in the future. Change the article
apply
this
will bring more accidents and unemployment issues to the socitey
. Reducing the congestion trouble Correct your spelling
society
as well as
best for long travels are the merits of this
. I do not think that the driverless
vehiles
have more advantages than disadvantages. Correct your spelling
vehicles
This
situation will be created
Wrong verb form
create
dangeors
situations in the future folks.Correct your spelling
dangerous
dangers
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