the chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. summarize the information and make the comparison. write at least 150 words.
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The pie chart and the table illustrate different modes of employment and education of university graduates of the anthropology department chosen after their graduation and compare their incomes in different sectors after five years.
Overall
, it is evident that a large proportion of the graduated Linking Words
students
are now working as full-time employees and only 5% of Use synonyms
students
chose to work as a part-timer and study at the same time. In the comparison of their incomes, a lot of anthropology graduates are earning more than 75000 Use synonyms
dollars
.
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To begin
with, almost 72% of the Linking Words
students
started to work after their graduation either part-time or full-time. Use synonyms
While
few graduates chose to pursue their post-graduate education, at least 12% of them remained unemployed and there was no information about 8% of the Linking Words
students
.
When it comes to their employment in different sectors, there are only a few employees who work for less than 75000 Use synonyms
dollars
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while
more than 45% of the private organisation workers earn less than 75000 Linking Words
dollars
. Use synonyms
However
, 50% of the employees in the government sector earn more than 100000 Linking Words
dollars
which dominates all other companies.Use synonyms
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