The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The presented bar chart depicts the trends of
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households
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household
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households
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owning and renting transportation and
house
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houses
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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Generally, it clearly shows that people who own
accommodation
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increased, whilst, decrease in households renting
accommodation
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. On the one hand, the highest
number
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were
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found in 2001 in owning household
accommodation
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by people. The first data start given from 198.
This
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year
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, was the lowest
number
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from another
year
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. But, 20 years later, the
number
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went up dramatically and had a steady movement until 1953. Right from 1961 until 1991 the
number
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rapidly grew to around 67% and went up slightly to the highest
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of 69%. In 2011
became
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it went
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down again to 65%.
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, the first
year
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in 1918 became the highest
number
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for renting household
accommodation
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by people. The percentage decreased until 2001 to 31%.
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, there are steady movement from 1939 and 1953 .
After
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this
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year
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, the
number
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became
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went
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down again and grew in the
last
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2011.
To conclude
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, the changes were significant between both kinds of data. Some data shows an increase and another shows a
decreasing
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words accommodation, number, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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