The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates and compares the total population of job-holders in Australia with different job titles based on their gender in the year 2003. The employment types are Managers, professionals, semi-professionals, tradespersons, production, clerical and labourers.
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, it is evident that males dominated most of the employment positions except for the clerical and professional posts and their total number of posts was comparatively higher than that of females.
To begin
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with, about 875000 men worked either as businessmen or as clerks
while
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the least proportion worked as daily-wage workers.
However
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, when studying women's employment opportunities, just over 100000 of them worked either in business or in production, but they showed a significant dominance in clerk positions which was almost 900000, which showcased their work preferences.
In addition
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to
this
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, it is noticeable that there was a huge figure gap in work posts
such
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as production men, businessmen and managers, where women workforce was very much lesser than that of men and the difference was over 400000 in the count.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment figures
  • Sectors
  • Significant disparities
  • Gender balance
  • Skewed
  • Trends
  • Patterns
  • Dominant
  • Inferred
  • Labor market
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Insights
  • Implications
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