The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011.
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The diagram illustrates the proportion of male and female pupils who passed their high school competency tests during the duration between 2010 and 2011.
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, the rate of female
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who passed their exams was higher than counterparts in almost all subjects, except Geography, between 2010 and 2011.
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, the gap in the percentage of girls and boys who completed their tests in Chemistry and Computer Science was the same. 56,3% of female
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passed their Computer Science examination, compared to that of male pupils were 42,1%. A similar change, but to a lesser extent, was seen in the Chemistry subject, with the percentage of girls and boys who completed
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competency exam being 30,2% and 14,1%, respectively. The rate of female
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and their counterparts who passed Foreign Languages and mathematics tests was the same at around 47%. Meanwhile, Geography was the only subject in which the proportion of male
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who completed the exam surpassed female
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during the period 2010-2011.
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