The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates how much spare
time
enjoyed
by males and Add a missing verb
was enjoyed
females
of various employment status
in the Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
year
1998 to 1999.
It is clear from the graph that the amount of leisure Fix the agreement mistake
years
time
men
was higher than Change preposition
for men
women’s
value in 3 out of 5 categories during the given period from 1998 to 1999. Change preposition
for women’s
While only
the data for Correct word choice
Only
females
was shown in 2 units including employed part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
and housewives.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the record of men in
employed Change preposition
apply
full
Add a hyphen
full-time
time
had about 45 hours
of free time
compared to the 38 hours
spare
Change preposition
of spare
time
of women from 1998 to 1999. Between 1998 and 1999, there was a levelling off in the amount of leisure time
in unemployed and retired categories by males anf
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and
females
had 80 and 75 hours
, respectively.
By contrast
, it is clear that
only the figure for females
in
employed Change preposition
apply
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
was 40 hours
of leisure time
from 1998 to 1999. However
, the spare time
of women in housewives was more than employed part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
by 10 hours
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, females, hours with synonyms.
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