Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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nations to introduce themselves
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of knowing other languages. Both sides have valid points and these points are discussed in the following paragraphs
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my opinion. First and foremost, most of the learners
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familiar with different
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to get ease with settling down and
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in other nations.
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grip on
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accent
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makes
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rural Indians
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knowledge of
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only,
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, those foreigners who are capable of speaking and
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understanding
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language
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could run their
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smoothly.
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in
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country is the main reason for
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On the contrary
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for several other
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readers
too. The very first reason is to
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understand
the culture of others; local
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the ancient history of any race, if
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community, he/she must
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good knowledge of
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local
accents.
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their
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carrer
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careers
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interpreter, as it is a handsome salary job that capable
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debate that most of the citizens learn
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language
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reasons
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learning foreign languages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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