Learning at university would be more effective if men and women were educated separetely. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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, Alhamdulillah, we are Muslims. We should act like a believer. In our religion, an unmarried man and woman cannot walk together, work, or even Linking Words
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, in the most prestigious universities in the world, separate education is preferred. In all universities, Linking Words
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