The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse.

The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse.
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The bar chart illustrates the outcome of a survey about the opinions of young Europeans on whether or not there would be improvements in five distinct aspects of life in the following two decades.
Overall
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, interpersonal communication was the only area that the majority of participants were positive about
while
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the outlook for urban air
quality
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was the most pessimistic. Regarding the anticipation towards how people communicate with each other, 54% of respondents believed there would be positive changes,
in contrast
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to 46% who held the opposite view.
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, the proportion of individuals anticipating adverse shifts in food
quality
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slightly outweighed those with positive expectations, at 51% versus 49%. Concerning the
quality
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of water, three-fifths of young participants predicted a deterioration, compared to the 40% who foresaw improvements. The pattern was fairly similar for health, with respective figures being 58% and 42%. Meanwhile, only a minority of individuals, 23%, answered that urban air
quality
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would see an enhancement.
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