The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The Bar chart illustrates the international sales of electronic devices of the major five companies in different years.

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the X-axis depicts the brands, the Y-axis shows the sold quantity in millions.

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, though there was a rise in demand for Samsung, Apple and ZTE from 2009 to 2011, the reverse is true in the case of others.

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, another interesting point is that the highest demand was for the two brands but in different years.

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the quantity, sales of Samsung almost doubled, considering the proportion, the number of mobiles sold by Apple soared from 20 to 150 million in 2013, which is around 7.5 times from 2009 to 2013.

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, considering both quantity and percentage, ZTE’s market share was low compared to any other brands.

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, in the case of Nokia, purchasing

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phone sank from 450 in 2009 to 250 in 2013, which is exactly the opposite of Samsung. After all, the rate of change of sales of LG was steady and small and it went down from 120 to 80 million from 2009 to 2013.

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