The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The maps depict the
town
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of Stokeford over a period of eight decades (1930-2010).
Overall
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, during
this
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period, the area underwent dramatic changes.
However
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, the river, which begins in the southwest corner of the map and flows northeast, is present in both maps. It can be seen that in 1930, a post office and a primary school lay in the centre of the
town
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.
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, a bridge stood in the north of
town
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. The location of these buildings did not change until 2010. On the one hand, farmlands, which stood in the northeast and southeast of the region, and shops, which were located to the north of the post office, were destroyed.
On the other hand
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, it is clearly observable that several new houses, especially around the extended roads, had been
setting
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up in
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town
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.
Moreover
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, where the retirement home lies in 2010, east of the
town
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, there used to be gardens and large houses in 1930.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • town
  • population
  • transformed
  • bustling
  • road network
  • residential areas
  • industrial sites
  • commercial zones
  • river
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • schools
  • hospitals
  • shopping centers
  • educational facilities
  • healthcare facilities
  • urbanization
  • development
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