The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart
illustrate
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illustrates
market
value
of four famus
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famous
organizationas
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organisations
among
2011 and 2016.
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in
Overall
, Google's market
price
remain
the same Wrong verb form
remained
where
Yahoo Correct word choice
whereas
get
down, Facebook increased exceptionally and Apple fluctuated.
Facebook Verb problem
went
satrted
from 7500 in 2011 and Correct your spelling
started
it's
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its
value
increaside
dramatically Correct your spelling
increased
increase
15000
in 2014. Change preposition
by 15000
Moreover
it getting up till 2016 Add a comma
Moreover,
which
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when
price
is 20000. Correct article usage
the price
On the other hand
Yahoo begain
at the same time Correct your spelling
began
begin
with
Facebook but it Change preposition
as
get
down excessively. Wrong verb form
got
It's
starting stock Correct your spelling
Its
price
was 75000 and dicreased
to 5500 in 2013, and down to 2016 with Correct your spelling
decreased
market
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a market
value
2000
.
On the other Change preposition
of 2000
side
Apple's Add a comma
side,
market
fluctuated every year from 2011 to 2016. It started with 5000 in 2011 and reached the highest 35000 in 2012 again get
down in 2013 Wrong verb form
getting
which
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when
market
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the market
price
was near to 7000. This
way every year it flatuated
and came to Correct your spelling
fluctuated
almsot
at the same Correct your spelling
almost
price
in 2016 where it start
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started
at
2011. Change preposition
in
In
the other Change preposition
On
side
google Add a comma
side,
persist
the same from 2011 to 2016 with Wrong verb form
persisted
stock
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a stock
value
1000
.Change preposition
of 1000
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Vocabulary: Replace the words market, value, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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