The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The three charts illustrate Australia's trade using
Australian
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dollars
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in three countries in 5 years from 2004.
Overall
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, both India and China's import figures enjoyed an upward
trend
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,
while
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the
number
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of export
dollars
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in the two countries saw a downward
trend
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.
Additionally
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, the
figure
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for both exported and imported
Australian
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dollars
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in the US remained nearly the same.
According to
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the first line graph, the
number
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of
Australian
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dollars
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imported
in
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China rose significantly from 20
billion
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in 2004 to 30
billion
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in 2008.
Then
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, it rocketed and peaked at over 35
billion
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in 2009. The export
figure
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in China increased slightly from 15
billion
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in 2004 to 25
billion
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in 2009, 10
billion
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less than its import
number
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. Australia's dollar imports in India increased from 25
billion
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to 35
billion
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and became the largest
figure
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in the chart.
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, the
number
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of
Australian
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dollar exports from India reached its highest point at approximately 25
billion
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in 2007,
then
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recovered the same
number
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in 2004 at just under 20
billion
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dollars
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in 2009. The
figure
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for Australia's dollar import in America experienced an unclear increasing
trend
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. Starting with 20
billion
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in 2004. It fluctuated insignificantly and reached roughly 23
billion
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in the
last
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year of the studied period. The export
figure
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seems to enjoy the same
trend
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, it began with 10
billion
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in 2004,
then
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rose and fell slightly and remained nearly the same
figure
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in 2009.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, dollars, trend, number, figure, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trade surplus
  • trade deficit
  • bilateral trade
  • exports
  • imports
  • economic relationship
  • year-on-year growth
  • trade volume
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • stagnation
  • commodities
  • market forces
  • import/export ratio
  • financial quarter
  • trade barriers
  • tariff
  • free trade agreement
  • economic indicators
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