The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates world
illiteracy
rates
estimated by area and sex for the
last
year.
Overall
, among 6
regions
there are three
regions
with the highest
illiteracy
rates
: Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South
Asia
. Three
regions
have the lowest
illiteracy
rates
: Developed countries, Latin American / Caribbean, and East
Asia
/ Oceania. In all
regions
women
represent the biggest share of the illiterate population.
According to
the chart, the most literate people live in Developed Countries with
illiteracy
rates
of about 1% among
men
and about 3% among
women
. In Latin America / Caribbean the
percentage
of illiterate
men
is approximately 10 times higher than in Developed Countries and the
percentage
of illiterate
women
is about 13%. In East
Asia
/ Oceania the
illiteracy
percentage
is about 8% and 20% respectively. The most significant
percentage
of illiterate people is in South
Asia
where about 35% of
men
and about 56% of
women
couldn't read. Arab States are close to the South
Asia
proportion of
illiteracy
with about 28% and 52% respectively.
Finally
, Sub-Saharan / Africa region has close
rates
to three most illiterate
regions
. In that region about 31% of
men
couldn't read and about 48% of
women
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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