The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates world
illiteracy
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rates
estimated by area and sex for the Use synonyms
last
year.
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Overall
, among 6 Linking Words
regions
there are three Use synonyms
regions
with the highest Use synonyms
illiteracy
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rates
: Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Use synonyms
Asia
. Three Use synonyms
regions
have the lowest Use synonyms
illiteracy
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rates
: Developed countries, Latin American / Caribbean, and East Use synonyms
Asia
/ Oceania. In all Use synonyms
regions
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women
represent the biggest share of the illiterate population.
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According to
the chart, the most literate people live in Developed Countries with Linking Words
illiteracy
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rates
of about 1% among Use synonyms
men
and about 3% among Use synonyms
women
. In Latin America / Caribbean the Use synonyms
percentage
of illiterate Use synonyms
men
is approximately 10 times higher than in Developed Countries and the Use synonyms
percentage
of illiterate Use synonyms
women
is about 13%. In East Use synonyms
Asia
/ Oceania the Use synonyms
illiteracy
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percentage
is about 8% and 20% respectively.
The most significant Use synonyms
percentage
of illiterate people is in South Use synonyms
Asia
where about 35% of Use synonyms
men
and about 56% of Use synonyms
women
couldn't read. Arab States are close to the South Use synonyms
Asia
proportion of Use synonyms
illiteracy
with about 28% and 52% respectively. Use synonyms
Finally
, Sub-Saharan / Africa region has close Linking Words
rates
to three most illiterate Use synonyms
regions
. In that region about 31% of Use synonyms
men
couldn't read and about 48% of Use synonyms
women
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