the line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The line graph
give
information Change the verb form
gives
in
the amount and kind of fast food eaten by Australian youth between 1975 and 2000.
In general, it is clear from the graph that Fish and Chips witnessed a dramatic Change preposition
on
fell
in popularity. Replace the word
fall
Additionally
, although
Pizza
and Hamburgers
considerably increased, the number of Australian youngsters consumed Pizza
and Hamburgers
.
Looking at the details, Fish and Chips slightly dropped for a half-decade. After that, improved to just under 100, then
significantly plummeted to just 40 over a 15-years period
from 1985 to 2000.
Focusing on Pizza
and Hamburgers
, the former swiftly grew between 1975 to 1995, then
remained popular throughout the period
, after
1975 Australian teens used over 80. Correct word choice
apply
On the other hand
, at the start of the period
the latter rapidly jumped for a decade. Add a comma
period,
Next,
consumption
Correct article usage
the consumption
Hamburgers
slightly climbed to just 100, Change preposition
of Hamburgers
then
stayed popularity
for Change preposition
in popularity
a
5 years. By the end of the Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
period
Pizza
and Hamburgers
kept on well-liked in similar.Submitted by TUTOO on
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