The following maps show the changes in the town of Springer from 1970 until now.

The maps depict the developments in Springer town over a period of 53 years (between 1970 and 2023).

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, during

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period, it can be seen that the area underwent dramatic changes. In 1970, a huge farmland was located in the south of the town.

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, two large forests are visible in the left map, one was situated in the west of the area, and the other was sited in the northeast.

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, a shop and two houses were in

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region.

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, from

this

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year until now, forests and farmlands were destroyed to make way for other buildings.

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, several new buildings have been developed. Considering the residential area, some new apartment blocks were constructed in the north and south of the region. With regard to the commercial side, five new shops were

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set up in the city

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. The airport, situated in the northeast, makes air travel possible for residents.

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, roads were extended, and a school was built over the period.

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The following maps show the changes in the town of Springer from 1970 until now.

City living in the 21st century is stressful and offers no advantage. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement.

Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of these fashions?

Nowadays, we are surround by advertising in our daily lives. Some people believe this has a positive effect on society. Others, however, say that it is a negative development. Discuss with both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think government should ban dangerous sports; others, however, believe that people should be free to do whatever they choose. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?