The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The map illustrates the development of Denham over the period given.
Overall
, the town of Denham has clearly been enlarged and its layout has Linking Words
also
been changed to the demand.
The farmland that was used for cows to graze which was located on the east side of river Stoke has been replaced by houses and a hall. In the past, there were some shops built along the river which were in the same position as the post office. Linking Words
However
, all the shops have been demolished and converted into residential areas.
At present, some retirement homes are erected just opposite the hall, but Linking Words
this
area which was located in the middle of the town used to be a large garden and some big houses. Linking Words
Moreover
, the land which was situated on the south of the garden has been transformed into houses. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the primary school has been enlarged, and the nearby farmland has been made way for residences.Linking Words
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