You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagram describes the usage of solar energy to produce warm
water
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,
as well as
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, warm
air
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. These s
processes
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are man-made
processes
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which entail a number of stages and it is
stated
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started
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by entering cool
water
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or cool
air
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into the
inlet
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, and the ending points
is
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are
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when warm
water
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and warm
air
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are produced.
Overall
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, after looking at the given
processes
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, it can be seen that
theses
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these
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processes
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are circular .
At the end
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of the
process
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process,
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warm
water
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or warm
air
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is produced. First of all, these
processes
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include some components which are a box with a transparent top that contains an
inlet
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and outlet at the opposite sides of the box. In the beginning, cool
water
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is entered via the
inlet
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.
Next,
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it
is gone
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goes
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through
water
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pipes.
Then
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, the heat energy from sun rays warmed the cold
water
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.
Finally
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, warm
water
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is produced and released from the outlet.
Additionally
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, hot
air
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is produced via the same mechanism as the warm
water
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.
However
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, no
water
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pipe is required to produce hot
air
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.
Accordingly
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, cold
air
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is entered
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enters
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through the
inlet
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and
become
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becomes
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under the direct effect of sun rays which hit the transparent top to warm up the cool
air
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. In the final step, warm
air
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is produced.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, air, processes, inlet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • solar panels
  • structure
  • components
  • function
  • diagrams
  • photovoltaic cells
  • electricity
  • sunlight
  • conduction
  • convection
  • radiation
  • comparison
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