The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
The graph gives information about the average change in the cost of copper, nickel, and zinc each month, and the percentage change compared with previous
months
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in 2014. It can be seen that the types of metals, except zinc, decreased and varied across different
months
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. At the beginning of the year, nickel had the highest percentage change. Over the next two
months
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, it witnessed a noticeable fall from 6% to –3% until June. From that moment, the rate went up to –1%, remaining static for three
months
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, and eventually reaching a rise of 1% in November and December.
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, zinc was the lowest at 1%, but overtook nickel by the end of the year. Over the period, its cost fluctuated, reaching its peak of 3% in February with a downward tendency until June at –1%.
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, it experienced stability at –0.5% and an upward trend to 2%.
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, copper stayed second with waves throughout the
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. It started at 2%, gradually decreasing to 0.5%, and like other metals, its percentage remained unchanged from July to September at 1%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words months with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
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  • public transportation
  • cultural attitudes
  • electric vs. traditional vehicles
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  • environmental implications
  • economic factors
  • socio-economic divide
  • technological advancements
  • public policy
  • environmental awareness
  • urban development
  • air quality
  • traffic congestion
  • accessibility
  • government initiatives
  • community actions
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