You went to a museum with your elderly friend last week. However, he/she found it difficult to walk around the museum. Write a letter to the manager and say: * Whom did you visit the museum with? * What problems/inconveniences did he/she face? * also, suggest solutions to enhance the museum visit experience for an elderly person.

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Dear
museum
managers: My name is Enas, graduated from
University
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the University
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of Khartoum,History College.Since I graduated I have started the master's program on ancient species in 20 PC.
Last
week ,I visited your
museum
with my grandfather who is
also
interested
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as interested
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as me
about
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history. Unlikely, my grandfather has a medical problem which leads him to move by a wheelchair. Unfortunately,We faced difficulties in pushing the wheelchair around the
museum
because of the carpet And the narrowest of the lines.The distance of these lines makes it difficult to hold two people at the same time particularly, the wheelchair. So I am writing
this
letter to express my inconvenient services from the
museum
and I propose to specify a space for elderly people to move around the
museum
conveniently without difficulties. Hoping from you to consider my complaint seriously and enhancement of the facilities in the future. Faithfully yours.
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Ensure that you address all parts of the task fully. This includes giving ample details about the museum visit, the specific problems faced, and clear suggestions for solutions.
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Maintain a formal writing tone throughout the letter to fit the context of writing to a museum manager, and avoid informal language.
coherence cohesion
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each containing one main idea, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.
coherence cohesion
Start your letter with a formal greeting and end with an appropriate sign-off. Make sure these adhere to the conventions of a formal letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Mobility issues
  • Inconveniences
  • Adequate facilities
  • Elderly-friendly
  • Resting areas
  • Impaired vision/hearing
  • Ramps
  • Elevators
  • Wheelchairs
  • Motorized scooters
  • Audio guides
  • Hearing aid compatibility
  • Assistive devices
  • Staff assistance
  • Special tours
  • Ergonomic seating
  • Visual aids
  • Multisensory exhibits
  • Inclusive design
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