Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area.
Mention about current sports facilities
What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced
How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group
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Provide a clear introduction to your letter that includes all relevant information about why you are writing. Also, ensure you address the letter appropriately, using the correct titles and names if known.
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Develop your ideas fully by expanding on the current sports facilities and why additional facilities are needed, including specific examples or experiences.
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Ensure your letter follows a logical order that presents ideas in a structured way, leading the reader through your points effortlessly.
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Use paragraphs effectively. Each paragraph should contain one main idea or subject. You have not provided enough content to assess this properly, but remember to keep this in mind as you write.
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Close your letter appropriately with an appropriate signing-off note (e.g., 'Yours faithfully' or 'Yours sincerely') depending on whether you know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
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