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Band 4.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Thomas, I am writing disappointment letter for furniture in your apartment. I am Sara the tenant of your flat recently I shifted here. When I was shifting here I saw some
wood work
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woodwork
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 is needed.
Besides
this
, the couch of
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the dinning
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dinning
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dining
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 room is ruptured from different sides. The leather of the sofa is
also
 torn from
inside
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the inside
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 and the cotton is coming out.
Although
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However
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, the noise is
being com
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coming
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 from bed and we cannot sleep well at night.
Furthermore
, the door locks are
missed
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missing
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 in the wardrobes and some are not locked
due to
 bad condition. There are only cupboards in the kitchen area and it's not enough for us. The main entrance of the room
is not pushed
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has not pushed
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 the lock properly and it
rquires
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requires
 to be changed. I would suggest you
to
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apply
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please fix these problems
from
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with
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 the carpenter so that your furniture
could
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can
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 remain
a
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in a
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better condition. If you cannot do
this
so
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apply
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allow me
that
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to
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 I could manage myself and after that I will share
you
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apply
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the cost
then
 give me
money
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the money
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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,
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logical structure
Address each bullet point in a separate paragraph to enhance structure clarity.
greeting and closing
Use appropriate formal endings to your letter to match the context of writing to a landlord.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph captures a singular idea or issue, providing clearer argumentation and structure.
complete response
Make sure to fully address the task by not only explaining the issues but also clearly stating your expectations for a resolution.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a consistently formal and polite tone throughout, suitable for correspondence with a landlord.
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