You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Thomas, I am writing disappointment letter for furniture in your apartment. I am Sara the tenant of your flat recently I shifted here. When I was shifting here I saw some

wood work

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woodwork

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is needed.

Besides

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this

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, the couch of

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the dinning

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dinning

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dining

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room is ruptured from different sides. The leather of the sofa is

also

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torn from

inside

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the inside

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and the cotton is coming out.

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Although

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However

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, the noise is

being com

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coming

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from bed and we cannot sleep well at night.

Furthermore

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, the door locks are

missed

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missing

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in the wardrobes and some are not locked

due to

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bad condition. There are only cupboards in the kitchen area and it's not enough for us. The main entrance of the room

is not pushed

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has not pushed

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the lock properly and it

rquires

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requires

to be changed. I would suggest you

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apply

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please fix these problems

from

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with

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the carpenter so that your furniture

could

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can

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remain

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in a

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better condition. If you cannot do

this

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Rephrase

apply

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allow me

that

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I could manage myself and after that I will share

you

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apply

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the cost

then

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give me

money

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the money

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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,

mobinadurrani43Sun Nov 26 2023

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logical structure

Address each bullet point in a separate paragraph to enhance structure clarity.

greeting and closing

Use appropriate formal endings to your letter to match the context of writing to a landlord.

single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph captures a singular idea or issue, providing clearer argumentation and structure.

complete response

Make sure to fully address the task by not only explaining the issues but also clearly stating your expectations for a resolution.

suitable writing tone

Maintain a consistently formal and polite tone throughout, suitable for correspondence with a landlord.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

187 words

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