In
days, some
people
think that
youngCorrect article usage
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generation is better
to takeChange preposition
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a
job
while
they
are still studyChange the verb form
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. I will discuss the benefits and
shortcomingFix the agreement mistake
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of the essay and give my own
.
Nowadays,
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and
lessChange the quantifier
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children in the world and single
childFix the agreement mistake
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get
spoilWrong verb form
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by
. Most young
people
doesChange the verb form
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not have a
lotAdd the preposition
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skills,
however
, it is a good opportunity for them to use their
after hoursAdd a hyphen
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or free
time
from
school
to get some jobs and have some
life
experience
or new skills. Study is important but
also
life
skills and
experience
are important tips for reality. In society, most
companyFix the agreement mistake
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like to work with
whoCorrect pronoun usage
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already have some
life
experience
rather than who is
momCorrect article usage
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or dad's boy/girl.
For instance
, Five
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restaurant is looking for a new worker and both Candidates give
theChange the word
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CV
and Correct word choice
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one of them have some
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time
experience
and
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othersCorrect quantifier usage
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just finished
school
, most of
timeAdd an article
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the first
job
seeker will get the
job
.
On the other hand
, there are many
job
traps in our
life
. Especially,
theyCorrect pronoun usage
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are some illegal groups looking for young workers who need quick money and without adults watching.
This
is type
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very attractive to
whoCorrect pronoun usage
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wantsCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to have a
job
immediately. Some young
people
do not
theAdd a missing verb
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trick because they want to find a
job
and get quick money it is easy to be fooled. In that case, it is good to have some
life
experience
but it might be an expensive lesson.
For example
, on the street some strangers
lookingWrong verb form
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for
people
who
is Unnecessary verb
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dream
to beChange preposition
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an actor/
actressFix the agreement mistake
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and introduce their company.
People
have no clue and get excited to
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the contract and end up
beenChange the form of the verb
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forceChange the form of the verb
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to take some naked
.
However
, I agree that
people
should get a
job
during their
school
. It
helpChange the verb form
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them to know
the Correct article usage
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society early and
also
helpCorrect subject-verb agreement
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them to earn
workingReplace the word
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experience
.
In conclusion,
finingCorrect your spelling
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a
job
during
school
free
time
or
school
is
a good adviceRemove the article
good advice
a piece of good advice
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for
group, it is
also
important to ask advice from who is older than you before
takeChange the verb form
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the
job
.