Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is some
people
think that universities should give graduates the information
that will be useful in the workplace, while
others argue it, saying the main function of a university is to give access to information
whether it will be useful or not for an employer.
I tend to think that universities should prepare students for future work
and give all the theoretical information
for this
.
Firstly
, it is well known that most people
do not work
by their initial profession and it says that the education that they took at university was not useful in the workplace. What I mean here is that the overwhelming majority of employees use their extracurricular experience and networking skills rather than information
that they learned in university. A good case in point is the first president of Kazakhstan, who was the common railway worker and became the leader of the nation by the above factors.
On the other hand
, it can also
be argued that most professionals need to be educated theoretically as engineers and medicians. That is
to say, if they do not know the theoretical part of their job, it will be impossible to do the work
correctly. Take for example
every doctor he probably likely studied for at least 8 years and practiced
for about 3 years it is to heal Change the spelling
practised
people
for which humanity should thank them. Another good example is the architects and engineers, who should know all the detailed information
to construct buildings or techniques without danger to the common people
.
In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that universities should add into their program more practical useful information
in work
rather than full theory without link with reality,
because Remove the comma
apply
student
will Fix the agreement mistake
students
work
with that information
his
whole Correct pronoun usage
their
life
.Fix the agreement mistake
lives
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