The pie chart below represents the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The bar chart shows how these causes affected three regions of the world in the 1990s. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart below represents the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The bar chart shows how these causes affected three regions of the world in the 1990s.

Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The provided pie chart presents the
reason
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productive
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the productive
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reduction of farming land and the table illustrates the percentage of these
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reason
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in particular
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countries in 1990.
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, it can be seen that over-grazing
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the most contribution, followed by deforestation and over-cultivation.
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, for the most total land degraded country was
Europe
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while
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the
lessest
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lowest
country was North
America
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.
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, the highest
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proportion
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reduction was over-grazing
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35%
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it was five times of other reasons. Deforestation took the second high distribution
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30% and over-cultivation was 2% less than it.
Europe
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had the majority of total land degraded
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23% but North
America
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only around
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one-fourth and had the
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lowest
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the three
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compared countries.
Europe
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had the largest share
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deforestation
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9.8%,
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however
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however,
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it is the
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lowest
reason
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North
America
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only 0.2%.
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the main
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North
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America in
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productive reduction was over-cultivation, Oceania had no contribution
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this
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.
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over-grazing for Oceania
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11.3%,
Europe
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and North
America
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were 5.5% and 1.5% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words reason, europe, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reduction" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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