The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
The graphic demonstrates the Gross Domestic Product generated by the IT and
Service
industry in Great Britain from 1992 to 2000.
Overall
, the main facts that stand out are that both increased as a proportion of GDP,
in contrast
,IT remained at a higher rate at that time. At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the
Service
industry exceeded 4 per
cent
of GDP,
whereas
IT accounted
this
over 6 per
cent
. Over the next four years, the levels were more similar, with both components standing between 6 and 8 per
cent
.
Although
, IT was still higher than the
Service
, though it dropped slightly from 1994 to 1996.
However
, over the following 4 years, the patterns of the two components were noticeably different the percentage of the
Service
industry went up gradually until reaching only 8 per
cent
,
while
IT depicted quite a sharp increase to 12 in 1998 and
then
nearly 15 in 2000.
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