The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
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a consumption of six types of Use synonyms
energy
by fuel - Use synonyms
petrol
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oil
, coal, natural Use synonyms
gas
, nuclear, solar and Use synonyms
wind
, and Use synonyms
hydropower
in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
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, the power of Linking Words
petrol
and Use synonyms
oil
is the primary Use synonyms
energy
in the USA over Use synonyms
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consumptions
of Use synonyms
energy
are coal and natural Use synonyms
gas
. The less Use synonyms
consumptions
are nuclear, solar / Use synonyms
wind
, and Use synonyms
Hydropower
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types
energy
both grow by 2023, Use synonyms
while
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hydropower
slightly decline by 2023.
In 1980, the main three types of Use synonyms
energy
- Use synonyms
petrol
and Use synonyms
oil
, coal, and natural Use synonyms
gas
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consumed at approximately 35, 17, and 20 quadrillion respectively. Wrong verb form
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of
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petrol
and Use synonyms
oil
and natural Use synonyms
gas
both fluctuated between 1980 and 1995. Meanwhile, the numbers of coal and nuclear rose gradually. Use synonyms
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, the amounts of Linking Words
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consumptions
of solar and Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
wind
and Use synonyms
hydropower
slightly decreased. After 1995, the Use synonyms
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dramatically
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and
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increased gradually, Use synonyms
while
the numbers of consumption of Linking Words
hydropower
declined.
By 2023, the main Use synonyms
consumptions
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energy
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about
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hydropower
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decease
by 2023.Correct your spelling
decrease
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