The table below shows informatipon and predictions regarding the change in percnetage of population aged 65 and above 3 countries
The table gives data and prognosis about people over 65 in 3 different countries and time by per cent.
Overall
, Linking Words
population
in all 3 countries Add an article
the population
had
been and will continue to grow.
Between 1988 and 2000 Canada and Germany, both Wrong verb form
has
has
been Change the verb form
have
increase
to Change the verb form
increasing
increased
little
more than 4%. Correct article usage
a little
Finally
, in 2000 they counted 20.67% and 25.32%. Meanwhile, during that period UK Linking Words
do
not have big changes or some increases. They account Wrong verb form
did
15
% in 2 years.
By 2030 some predictions Change preposition
for 15
gives
information that Change the verb form
give
population
Correct article usage
the population
of
aged 65 and above in all 3 countries will Change preposition
apply
up
approximately Add a missing verb
be up
to
5,5% . Canada Change preposition
apply
calculate
around 26% , Germany just over 30% which is the highest one. At that time the UK Change the verb form
calculates
also
will glow approximately Linking Words
to
20%.Change preposition
apply
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