The line graph shows the number of people who used different communication services in the world.

The line graph shows the number of people who used different communication services in the world.
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The line graph gives detailed information about how many people used various connection services worldwide in the space of a decade.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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both figures, namely Fixed and Mobile broadband the lowest
while
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there was a dramatic climb in the Cellular phone service during the period.
Moreover
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, it is
also
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apparent that Landline and Internet programs went up to almost similar points
at the end
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of the period. In detail, the Fixed and Mobile broadband represented standability from 1998 to 2006 and reached a negligible rise to 5 in 2008.
In particular
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, Cellular phone service witnessed a high growth to 20 in 2002, to 40 in 2006, and to roughly 70 in 2008 which was an ending point.
In contrast
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, the Landline was a slight increase to 20 in 2006, afterwards, upturned to around 18 in 2008.
Besides
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that, Internet programs peaked gradually to 10 in 2004.
However
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, in 2006, there was a noticeable jump to 20 and it virtually remained unchanged in 2008.
Last
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but not least,the Cellular phone was one of the most popular services in the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication services
  • overall trend
  • significant increase/decrease
  • traditional vs. modern
  • technological advancements
  • regional disparities
  • adoption and usage
  • future predictions
  • sociopolitical events
  • altering usage patterns
  • detailed analysis
  • popularity
  • emphasize
  • demonstrate
  • surpass
  • overshadow
  • implications
  • innovation
  • transition
  • dominance
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