The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
chart
depicts the number of
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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who
partecipated
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participated
participate
in evening courses at an education
center
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centre
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for adults in 2009. The pie
chart
shows us the age of these
partecipants
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participants
.
Overall
, evening courses were more popular for
women
. Most
partecipants
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participants
were over 50 or middle-aged. Looking at the bar
chart
, we can see quite a difference between the two sexes. The course with the highest number of enrolled students was Language
and
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40 of them were
women
and only 20
men
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were men
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.
On the other hand
, the sculpture class seemed more popular
between
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among
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men: with 10 male students and around 5
women
. For painting the interest rate looked quite even between the two sexes, with 25 men and 30
women
enrolled. Regarding the pie
chart
, evening courses have only
a
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5% of students who are under 20 years old. 42% of them
ar
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are
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50 or over and 25% are between 40 and 59, making
this
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these
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evening classes quite popular for middle-aged.
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