the diagrams show changes to a medical centre from 2008 to 2010

the diagrams show changes to a medical centre from 2008 to 2010
The maps illustrate how a medical centre changed after some developments between 2008 and 2010.
Overall
, the most notable improvement was the expansion of the medical centre
along with
the addition of more rooms, serving different purposes. In 2008, the main entrance led to a large waiting
room
with a
a
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staff office and a reception on the top right.
This
area and the laboratory on its right side remained unchanged in 2010.
However
, in 2010, a pharmacy was erected on top of the laboratory and in the left space of the waiting
room
, an education
room
and a mother and child
room
were built. There was a corridor in the
central
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of the map in 2008,
seperating
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separating
three doctor’s offices on the top and other facilities on the bottom and it was
extented
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extended
to the right side in 2010. Moving to the top of the map,
while
the treatment
room
on the left space remained the same throughout the period, the doctor’s offices were cut down by breath to provide space for an extra one and a store
room
.
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