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the tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table represents the amount of world’s
population
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 and its distribution in different regions between 1950 and 2000, it
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 depicts the prediction of the
population
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 of the world in 2050.
Overall
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 it can be seen that the
population
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 of Africa,
Asia
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, South
America
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, and Oceania increased
whereas
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 the percentage of people in Europe and North
America
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 declined over the following period.
Furthermore
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, the total number of individuals experienced upward trends following time. Looking at the data sets of Africa,
Asia
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, South
America
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, and Oceania in more detail
it is clear that
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 9% of the
population
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 in 1950 rose to 13% in 2000 in Africa and it is estimated that it will be 20% in 2050.
In addition
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, people of
Asia
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 and Latin
America
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 increased by 4% and 3% in 2000 respectively from 56% and 6% in 1950.
Moreover
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, the assumed
population
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 in 2050 of
Asia
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 will decrease slightly to 59% but
this
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 figure for South
America
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 will remain unchanged as 2000. It is forecasted that only 1% of the world
population
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 will live which was below 1 percent in 1950 in Oceania. Turning to the information sets of Europe and North
America
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 in detail it is evident that the
population
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 of Europe underwent a downward trend, accounting for 22% in 1950, 12% in 2000, and 7% in 2050.
Similarly
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, the people of North
America
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 went down to 5% in 2000 from 7% in 1950 and it is predicted 4% in 2050. By 2000, the world
population
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 had rocketed to 6 billion from 2.5 billion and it is forecasted that it will go up to 9 billion (approximately) in 2050.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, asia, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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