The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate how the industrial zone in the city of Norbition is going to develop in the future.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the Linking Words
road
network will be developed and become complicated. Use synonyms
Further
, all the factories will be replaced by housing schemes. A bridge will be constructed over the river Linking Words
while
adding Linking Words
few
new buildings Correct article usage
a few
in to
the society.
Join the words
into
To begin
with, the farmland area will be Linking Words
undergone
Wrong verb form
undergoing
constructing
Replace the word
construction
new
houses with Change preposition
of new
a
access Change the article
an
road
from the Use synonyms
round-about
. A fresh bridge will be established over the Correct your spelling
roundabout
rever
to give Correct your spelling
river
the
access to farmland. Correct article usage
apply
Further
, another minor Linking Words
round-about
will be built Correct your spelling
roundabout
while
improving the complexity of the Linking Words
road
network significantly.
A drastic conversion can be seen in the proposed map regarding the housing. All the established factories in Use synonyms
existing
map will be replaced by houses. Despite the straight Add an article
the existing
road
in Use synonyms
south
corner. The major change is adding new buildings to the proposed plan to enhance the facilities in Add an article
the south
the
Norbition Correct article usage
apply
city
. A playground, school, medical centre and a number of shops will be Capitalize word
City
appreared
in Correct your spelling
appeared
appreciated
modern
plan rather than the current map.Correct article usage
the modern
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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