The line chart below shows the teenage pregnancy rates in selected countries - Australia, Sweden, the United States, and South Africa - from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the teenage pregnancy rates in selected countries - Australia, Sweden, the United States, and South Africa - from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides information about the
statistic
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of youth pregnancy in four countries which are Australia, Sweden, The United States
as well
as
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and
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South Africa, which
established
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between 1985 and 2019. It can be seen that South Africa is the only country which has
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fluctuating
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number
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while
others are slightly
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.
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first,
South Africa,
that
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is
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an undevelop
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undevelop
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undeveloped
country among
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of them, had
30
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a 30
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percentage
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rate in 1985 and it increased
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two decades.
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, it
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decreased back to the
begining
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beginning
number
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2019.
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, the only developing nation, which is The United States, was the highest
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rate with approximately 43
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in 1985 and it fell
down of
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30% in 2019.
In addition
, the two latest states, which are Australia and Sweden, had only
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% differentiation of average
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with 20% and 15% for the latter country, respectively. Both of them were decreased to 5% in 2019.
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