The diagram below shows the production of olive oil .
The diagram displays how the olive oil is produced.
In general, the production consists of seven different stages, which are picking, rinsing, smashing, packing, pressing, separating, and selling.
The initial process commences with picking the
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cold water. Afterwards, they are belted and transferred to smashing machinery for several durations. In Remove the article
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section, they are pulverized into two different forms namely olive paste and olive stones. Linking Words
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pressing
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, both ready-to-sell products are added to the storage and sold in public.Linking Words
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