The diagram below shows the production of olive oil .

The diagram below shows the production of olive oil .
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The diagram displays how the olive oil is produced. In general, the production consists of seven different stages, which are picking, rinsing, smashing, packing, pressing, separating, and selling. The initial process commences with picking the
olive
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them in baskets. The olives
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are
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in
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and rinsed with
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cold water. Afterwards, they are belted and transferred to smashing machinery for several durations. In
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section, they are pulverized into two different forms namely olive paste and olive stones.
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the latter is packed in a bag with holes in it prior to
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and separating step. The
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mentioned
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purpose is to generate the oil and water version of the early form.
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, both ready-to-sell products are added to the storage and sold in public.
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  • Harvesting
  • Ripe
  • Sorting
  • Crushing
  • Paste
  • Grinding stones
  • Steel blades
  • Pressing
  • Extraction
  • Liquids
  • Centrifuged
  • Settle
  • Purified
  • Distribution
  • Olive trees
  • Labels
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