The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart describes the numbers of
men
and women
, attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009.The pie chart illustates
information about the ages of the course participants.
The bar chart states that Correct your spelling
illustrates
women
stands
high in every Change the verb form
stand
activities
of attending various evening classes. The Change to a singular noun
activity
people
bteween
50 and above has the highest percentage among all other Correct your spelling
between
person
.
In Change the wording
people
drama
there are 10 Add a comma
drama,
men
attending the eveining
Correct your spelling
evening
tution
.For painting more than Correct your spelling
tuition
20men
and 30 Correct your spelling
20 men
womens
are attending the courses .The Correct your spelling
women
women's
least
number was in sculpture class, the strength of Correct word choice
lowest
men
was more than women
.40 women
and 20 men
are attending the language course , this
was the highest among all the others .
The people
under age 20 have tha
least amount who attending the classes . Correct your spelling
the
people
under age
Correct article usage
the age
40
to 49 Change preposition
of 40
has
the second largest percentage Correct subject-verb agreement
have
of
26% . The more amount of Change preposition
apply
people
who are going to evening course is between the age of 50 or above with the percentage of 42.Submitted by insighttribez on
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