1) The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In our modern era, it is always debated that vehicles are one of the significant
aspect
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aspects
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amount of environmental issues, and the best solution Correct your spelling
the
of
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to
this
is the high prices of fuel
. To examine this
debate, this
essay will examine both merits and demerits of it, and give my point of view.
Firstly
and foremost, accessable
and cheap Correct your spelling
accessible
fuel
for transport makes it approachable for everyone. If the majority of the society will use their own cars the pollution of air will raise
in several times. Correct your spelling
rise
According to
the statistics, almost all members of families have personal cars. For example
, if the family on the average do have five members the spoil
of nature will boom, and Replace the word
spoiling
enlarge of
the Verb problem
increasing
prise
of Correct your spelling
price
fuel
for vehicles, might be a good decision for nature. Consequently
, the families may use one car for close destinations among the members also
, a public transport
may be a beneficial Remove the article
public transport
a means of public transport
a mode of public transport
choise
for financial, health and environmental aspects. Correct your spelling
choice
For instance
, individuals can to
economize their money, arrive Fix the infinitive
apply
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at the
the
destinations on foot after bus stops, and be more attentive to Change the word
their
world
.
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the world
Secondly
, the high costs of fuel
for transportation have negative sides. People with relatively less
salaries will not use personal cars for their comfort. Fix the agreement mistake
low
For example
, this
option leads to tricks for employees who work far from city
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the city
center
and the public transport works poorly. Change the spelling
centre
Moreover
, the
education at school can Correct article usage
apply
affects
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affect
this
problem globally, If the students were taught some lessons about world
and ecology, Correct article usage
the world
how
it is of the essence for every Correct word choice
and how
lives
they would be more mindful Change to a singular noun
life
to
ecology. Change preposition
of
For instance
, schools can provide with
some lessons in the fresh air, give basic tasks , take after flowers and trees so forth.
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apply
To sum up
, to increase
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increasing
of
value Correct article usage
the of
for
vehicles makes Change preposition
apply
it
available for only some parts of Correct pronoun usage
them
community
, and does not have a great influence Add an article
the community
in
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on
this
issue. I firmly agree that,
educational background Remove the comma
apply
have
more effect Correct subject-verb agreement
has
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environmental problems.Change preposition
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