1) The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In our modern era, it is always debated that vehicles are one of the significant
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is the high prices of
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. To examine
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essay will examine both merits and demerits of it, and give my point of view.
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and foremost,
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accessible
and cheap
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for transport makes it approachable for everyone. If the majority of the society will use their own cars the pollution of air will
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in several times.
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the statistics, almost all members of families have personal cars.
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, if the family on the average do have five members the
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of nature will boom, and
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the
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of
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for vehicles, might be a good decision for nature.
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, the families may use one car for close destinations among the members
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,
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public transport
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may be a beneficial
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for financial, health and environmental aspects.
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, individuals can
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economize their money, arrive
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destinations on foot after bus stops, and be more attentive to
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, the high costs of
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for transportation have negative sides. People with relatively
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salaries will not use personal cars for their comfort.
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,
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option leads to tricks for employees who work far from
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and the public transport works poorly.
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,
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education at school can
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problem globally, If the students were taught some lessons about
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and ecology,
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and how
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it is of the essence for every
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they would be more mindful
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ecology.
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, schools can provide
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some lessons in the fresh air, give basic tasks , take after flowers and trees so forth.
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,
to increase
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of
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value
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vehicles makes
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available for only some parts of
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, and does not have a great influence
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issue. I firmly agree that
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educational background
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more effect
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environmental problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • excessive use
  • encouraging public transportation
  • sustainable energy sources
  • hydrogen-powered vehicles
  • generate additional revenue
  • environmentally friendly projects
  • disproportionately affects
  • lower-income individuals
  • accessible public transportation options
  • sudden hikes
  • inflation
  • social inequality
  • renewable energy
  • promoting carpooling
  • equitable
  • addressing environmental issues
  • punitive measures
  • sustainable lifestyle
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