1) The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In our modern era, it is always debated that vehicles are one of the significant

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the

amount of environmental issues, and the best solution

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is the high prices of

fuel

. To examine

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debate,

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essay will examine both merits and demerits of it, and give my point of view.

Firstly

and foremost,

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accessible

and cheap

fuel

for transport makes it approachable for everyone. If the majority of the society will use their own cars the pollution of air will

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in several times.

According to

the statistics, almost all members of families have personal cars.

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, if the family on the average do have five members the

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of nature will boom, and

enlarge of

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the

prise

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price

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of

fuel

for vehicles, might be a good decision for nature.

Consequently

, the families may use one car for close destinations among the members

also

,

a public transport

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public transport

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may be a beneficial

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choice

for financial, health and environmental aspects.

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, individuals can

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economize their money, arrive

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the

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destinations on foot after bus stops, and be more attentive to

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.

Secondly

, the high costs of

fuel

for transportation have negative sides. People with relatively

less

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salaries will not use personal cars for their comfort.

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,

this

option leads to tricks for employees who work far from

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center

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and the public transport works poorly.

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,

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education at school can

affects

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problem globally, If the students were taught some lessons about

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and ecology,

how

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it is of the essence for every

lives

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they would be more mindful

to

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ecology.

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, schools can provide

with

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some lessons in the fresh air, give basic tasks , take after flowers and trees so forth.

To sum up

,

to increase

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of

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the of

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value

for

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apply

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vehicles makes

it

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available for only some parts of

community

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, and does not have a great influence

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issue. I firmly agree that

,

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educational background

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more effect

in

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environmental problems.