Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that keeping wild

animals

in a

zoo

is arguable. Some people think the

animals

should be kept in zoos,

while

others think they should live in their natural habitats. In my humble opinion, the

zoo

should not exist, and the elaboration will be covered in the following essay.

To begin

with, some humans think that

zoo

captivation is one of the best practices to keep endangered creatures safe from starvation, poachers,

as well as

predators.

Therefore

, they

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the

animals

and bring them into the

zoo

. As an illustration,

Sumatera

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the Sumatera

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Elephant is one of the

animals

which is included in the

Animals

Appendices because their habitat

had

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decreased and

also

a threat from the poachers who aim their tusks. Because of

this

reason, humans bring them into

zoo

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to keep them alive.

Hence

, society could see

this

endangered animal in the

zoo

for the next generation and could enrich their knowledge about

this

endemic creature.

However

, bringing

animals

to the

zoo

will

take

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numerous costs because the management should keep them well and should make their habitat similar to the wild.

Moreover

, the management has to pay the expert to get a deep understanding of the creature

as well as

its special needs. Sadly, based on the common

zoo

's actual condition, the management just tries to get some profits from maintaining and operating the

zoo

. They do not really care about the

animals

, they are just

money oriented

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.

On the contrary

, based on the aforementioned view, some environmentalists and animal lovers think that all creatures should live in the wild. They think keeping

animals

in zoos has tremendous negative impacts

instead

of benefits aspects. They believe it is still possible to take care of the

animals

without captivation,

such

as a

sanctuary

. Taking Way Kambas

Sanctuary

in Lampung, Indonesia.

This

sanctuary

provides a natural habitat for their

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Sumatra elephants

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.

Moreover

, the experts, they make collaborate with Non-Governmental Organizations

who

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specialized

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in

animals

. To operate

this

sanctuary

, they arrange some tourism patterns to attract tourists, and the income from

this

method will be used for monthly employees and experts. If they get numerous funds from the sponsor, they will do camera procurement in the forest just in case to prevent the

animals

from the poacher, unnatural

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of the

animals

, and from natural disasters.

To conclude

,

instead

of

animals

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captivation, I assume that keeping

animals

in the

sanctuary

is a better method to keep the species from danger.