You want to sell your Laptop. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you are selling the Laptop • Describe the Laptop. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Dear Sara,
I am just writing
this
letter to you if you are interest
in buying my laptop. because I want to sell it.As you know it Change the verb form
are interested
is
not Verb problem
has
passing
too much time Verb problem
taken
that
I bought it . Yet unfortunately I have to sell it because I am Correct word choice
since
inroled
in a new course at Stanford University which has too many high expenses .
Correct your spelling
enrolled
involved
This
is a Mac laptop of new
face series, a high_teq one with black coloured but I put a red cover on it and you should be sure about its perfect appearance: Correct article usage
the new
although
,if you want to know more about this
gadget, I can send its written information on its booklet.
Think about it and call me on Friday afternoon if you like to come and see it .
your friend,
Marry.Submitted by sajad.bazdar.2012 on
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Greeting and Closing
You should ensure that your letter has a clear structure with an appropriate opening and closing. Salutations and sign-offs help frame your communication effectively.
Single Idea Per Paragraph
Paragraphs should be used to separate ideas clearly. You should focus on one main idea per paragraph, which wasn't consistently followed in the letter.
Task Achievement
The response needs to clearly address all the bullet points in the prompt. Provide a detailed description of the laptop, including specifications, condition, and any other relevant information, which was touched on but could be expanded.
Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your letter to align with the context of writing to a friend. Avoid informal contractions and maintain professional but friendly language. Pay close attention to capitalization and punctuation throughout.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,