The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comprasions where relevant.

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The chart shows the information about average weekly spending of

income

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by families in 1968 and in 2018.

Overall

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this

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diagram

have

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has

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eight positions including food, housing etc. Both in 1968 and in 2018 major weekly

income

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spending was the food.

Whereas

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in 1968 food covered 35% of all salary, in 2018

results

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result

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was

about

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apply

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just more than

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apply

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15%. Housing in 1968 required only 10% of

income

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, but in 2018

this

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position was

rised

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raised

risen

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apply

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to less than a quarter of total

income

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. Fuel and power in 1968 required a little bit more than in 2018, but

percentage

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the percentage

a percentage

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of clothing and

footware

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footwear

was higher in 1968 than in 2018. People in 1968 averagely spent for household goods more than five per

cents

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cent

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. After 50 years

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this

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these

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values

isn't

Verb problem

haven't

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changed for a bit. Transport questions in 1968 required a small minority,

then

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, in 2018 the same transport asked for 15% of all

income

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. In conclusion,

this

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chart is a source of

the

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apply

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information about average weekly spending by families in 1968 and 2018. All the percentages

given

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are given

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correctly and

mathes

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match

the reality.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

182 words

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