The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comprasions where relevant.
The chart shows the information about average weekly spending of
income
by families in 1968 and in 2018. Overall
, this
diagram have
eight positions including food, housing etc.
Both in 1968 and in 2018 major weekly Change the verb form
has
income
spending was the food. Whereas
in 1968 food covered 35% of all salary, in 2018 results
was Fix the agreement mistake
result
about
just more than Rephrase
apply
a
15%. Housing in 1968 required only 10% of Correct article usage
apply
income
, but in 2018 this
position was rised
Correct your spelling
raised
risen
up
to less than a quarter of total Change preposition
apply
income
.
Fuel and power in 1968 required a little bit more than in 2018, but percentage
of clothing and Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
footware
was higher in 1968 than in 2018.
People in 1968 averagely spent for household goods more than five per Correct your spelling
footwear
cents
. After 50 years Fix the agreement mistake
cent
this
values Correct determiner usage
these
isn't
changed for a bit. Transport questions in 1968 required a small minority, Verb problem
haven't
then
, in 2018 the same transport asked for 15% of all income
.
In conclusion, this
chart is a source of the
information about average weekly spending by families in 1968 and 2018. All the percentages Correct article usage
apply
given
correctly and Add the auxiliary verb
are given
mathes
the reality.Correct your spelling
match
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