Task 1: The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
depicts
how many employers in the 4 sectors (Manufacturing, Building, Verb problem
shows
Commerce
, and Services), recruiting
Wrong verb form
recruited
the
staff with 3 different difficulties between 2003 and 2004.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, There was a growth in difficulties to
finding skilled Change preposition
in
workers
and unskilled workers
from 2003 and 2004 in all sectors, except the commerce
sector
. While recruiting
technical and managerial Correct word choice
Recruiting
workers
were
figured with an easy task Correct subject-verb agreement
was
over
a year.
Nearly Change preposition
for over
a
half of Correct article usage
apply
workers
with skill
were hard to Fix the agreement mistake
skills
be recruited
. Wrong verb form
recruit
This
percentage increase
considerably by around 5 % in Replace the word
increased
manufacturing
, building and services sectors and It decreased in the Correct article usage
the manufacturing
commerce
sector
from 47 % to 41 %. Likewise
, unskilled workers
also
had the same trend with a surge by
5 % Change preposition
of
approximately
in all Rephrase
apply
sector
, with an exception Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
on
Change preposition
in
commerce
Correct article usage
the commerce
sector
dropping
to 19 %.
Finding Wrong verb form
which dropped
workers
with competency in technical and managerial was the easiest task among other categories. The overall
percentage was below 15 % in 2003, and this
number had a gradual decline below 10 % in all parts in 2004.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words commerce, workers, sector with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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