Task 1: The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1: The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
depicts
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shows
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how many employers in the 4 sectors (Manufacturing, Building,
Commerce
, and Services),
recruiting
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recruited
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the
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apply
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staff with 3 different difficulties between 2003 and 2004.
Overall
, There was a growth in difficulties
to
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in
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finding skilled
workers
and unskilled
workers
from 2003 and 2004 in all sectors, except the
commerce
sector
.
While recruiting
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Recruiting
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technical and managerial
workers
were
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was
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figured with an easy task
over
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for over
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a year. Nearly
a
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apply
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half of
workers
with
skill
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skills
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were hard to
be recruited
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recruit
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.
This
percentage
increase
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increased
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considerably by around 5 % in
manufacturing
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the manufacturing
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, building and services sectors and It decreased in the
commerce
sector
from 47 % to 41 %.
Likewise
, unskilled
workers
also
had the same trend with a surge
by
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of
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5 %
approximately
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apply
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in all
sector
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sectors
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, with an exception
on
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in
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commerce
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the commerce
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sector
dropping
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which dropped
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to 19 %. Finding
workers
with competency in technical and managerial was the easiest task among other categories. The
overall
percentage was below 15 % in 2003, and
this
number had a gradual decline below 10 % in all parts in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words commerce, workers, sector with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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